Comments for Abnegation

Comment on phoenix by susan

susan — Sun, 01 Nov 2009 07:15:33 +0000

beautiful poem \ feels sweet and pure – could it be missing a few details at the end?

Comment on valley road by mattysue

mattysue — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 07:57:40 +0000

hey you…. nice to bumb into you here aren’t we all prisioners of our own opinions!

Comment on in my youth by mattysue

mattysue — Mon, 22 Jun 2009 05:25:09 +0000

april 16th? APRIL 16TH????

It’s almost July! Where’d you go?

Comment on thick, pendulous by Kitty

Kitty — Fri, 05 Jun 2009 22:58:25 +0000

i like every line but this one:

lips kissing naked souls

naked souls is just oo cliche for me….

Comment on in my youth by Kitty

Kitty — Fri, 05 Jun 2009 22:57:00 +0000

this line i relate to well– “the deep, celestial connection
eye had with everything”

i like the reflection/ the wistful tone. i only felt like i moved from a memoir to a bedroom scene!! but then, it is YOUR poem what would it be without your ’signature’, eh?

Comment on seven by abnegation

abnegation — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 06:01:42 +0000

sooooooo eye apparently have well over a dozen unpublished posts. drafts. sitting. waiting. lonely. neglected.

this one was from december.

eye dont remember this one. eye dont remember writing any of them.

just say “no” kids.

Comment on phoenix by elisabeth82

elisabeth82 — Tue, 14 Apr 2009 17:29:30 +0000

hot hot hot

Comment on trevor reznik by elisabeth82

elisabeth82 — Sun, 08 Mar 2009 23:33:56 +0000

aha, i love it!!

Comment on moment of clarity by abnegation

abnegation — Mon, 09 Feb 2009 03:20:02 +0000

no no no… shameless thief, thank you. get it right! lol. eye was wondering how long it would take you 2 discover it. eye shall credit you post haste! (maybe)

Comment on moment of clarity by adaymo

adaymo — Mon, 09 Feb 2009 00:19:36 +0000

thief!