valley road

unknown 2 me
exposed brick and wood floors
high ceilings
somewhere in the distance
a train
wailing like a banshee–
curses
soft words from the corner of her mouth
bloodpride and insecurity, eye was
so much in the watching of her
my senses merge
drowisly eye
cant make sense enough of anything
withdrew
from her reserve of patience
until there was nothing left but a thin
layer of generosity
until eye was a prisioner
of my own opinion….
instead of learning how 2 kill time
without injuring eternity, we
always promised 2 pay
2morrow
while we slowly died 2day

~ by abnegation on October 20, 2009.

3 Responses to “valley road”

  1. hey you…. nice to bumb into you here :) aren’t we all prisioners of our own opinions!

  2. oh man i’ve missed your writing…simply brilliant…

  3. mSue: hey! nice indeed…. perhaps eye can make it a more common occurrence and brush off some of the cobwebs around here.

    aZing: its nice 2 know you havent completely given up on me! ;)

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